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Someone offers someone an opportunity vs. Someone offers an opportunity to someo...

Someone offers someone an opportunity vs. Someone offers an opportunity to someone

I am trying to express an idea but I am not sure it is proper:

I'm writing a letter to someone explaining a situation, but I need to be sure the person will understand.

My sentence is the following:

Mr.V, our yoga teacher, offers the opportunity to non-experienced teachers from Europe, to organize outdoor multiple yoga courses to celebrate summer.

Is this correct? Does it sound natural? Or do I have to write way like this:

Mr V, our yoga teacher, offers to non-experienced teachers from Europe the opportunity to organize (...).

Or even,

Non-experienced teachers from Europe are given the opportunity by Mr V, our yoga teacher, to organize an outdoor multiple yoga course

I have the feeling that English speakers won't understand... Can you?



Top Answer/Comment:

This one is the best: "Mr V, our yoga teacher, offers to non-experienced teachers from Europe the opportunity to organize (...)".

Except... what is an "outdoor multiple yoga course"? That wording is hard to understand. That is the unclear part.

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